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Şu cümlelere bir el atın yahu
Bir el atın gözünüzü seveyim. Bir şey eksik ama toparlayamadım. Kafa gitti.
To be honest, I would love to take my chances to use my skills and experience for more fulfilling projects, specially regarding to a more awareness among the better youth and social communities, definitely not for big corporations.
I believe that the combination of my administrative skills with hardwork and activities could give me the best opportunity to display my real potential in a different way.
To be honest, I would love to take my chances to use my skills and experience for more fulfilling projects, specially regarding to a more awareness among the better youth and social communities, definitely not for big corporations.
I believe that the combination of my administrative skills with hardwork and activities could give me the best opportunity to display my real potential in a different way.
İyi görünüyor sanki. Bir eksiklik göremedim.
- humblebirth
(11.08.15 18:24:25)
bir iki ufak şey var:
"a more awareness" kısmı tam olmamış çünkü awareness countable değil. şöyle olsa daha iyi:
"especially regarding awareness, mostly among the youth and the social communities, definitely not big corporations."
"combination"dan sonra da "with" olmasa daha temiz olur:
"I believe that the combination of my administrative skills and my hardwork and activities will give me..."
"will" kullanın bence, daha iddialı :)
"a more awareness" kısmı tam olmamış çünkü awareness countable değil. şöyle olsa daha iyi:
"especially regarding awareness, mostly among the youth and the social communities, definitely not big corporations."
"combination"dan sonra da "with" olmasa daha temiz olur:
"I believe that the combination of my administrative skills and my hardwork and activities will give me..."
"will" kullanın bence, daha iddialı :)
- bir garip melek (11.08.15 23:24:56)
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