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ingilizce kısa metin düzeltme
merhaba,
ben sımdı 2 kelıme ing bir şeyler yazdım ama kimi yerlerde çakmalık var gibi. nasıl daha şık hale sokabilir. yardımcı olursanız çok güzel olacak.
teşekkürler.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
We are a Turkish company which working in energy sector, specially solar energy system. We have a new solar energy project as a residental project in North Iraq for residential commercial rooftop application includes at least thousand houses. We request your product info&prices and the cost of installation info etc.
Appriciate for your help.
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ben sımdı 2 kelıme ing bir şeyler yazdım ama kimi yerlerde çakmalık var gibi. nasıl daha şık hale sokabilir. yardımcı olursanız çok güzel olacak.
teşekkürler.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
We are a Turkish company which working in energy sector, specially solar energy system. We have a new solar energy project as a residental project in North Iraq for residential commercial rooftop application includes at least thousand houses. We request your product info&prices and the cost of installation info etc.
Appriciate for your help.
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We are a Turkish company, having operations in energy sector..
daha havalı olabilir.
daha havalı olabilir.
- SARI
(15.04.10 21:20:45)
To whom it may concern
diye başla derim geri kalanı ise neresinden düzeltsem bilemedim.
diye başla derim geri kalanı ise neresinden düzeltsem bilemedim.
- lpgli tosbaga
(15.04.10 21:22:29)
İlk cümleyi değiştirdim. Sanırım ikinci cümlede project ve residential tekrar ettiği için fazla kalabalık olmuş. At least yerine over düşündüm. Kalanı da değiştirdim. Şöyle yapsak:
Our company operates on the energy sector, escpecially solar energy system.
We have a new solar energy project in North Iraq for residential commercial rooftop application includes over thousand houses.
We would like to know detailed information about your products, prices, and the installation costs.
Thank you for your interest in advance,
Our company operates on the energy sector, escpecially solar energy system.
We have a new solar energy project in North Iraq for residential commercial rooftop application includes over thousand houses.
We would like to know detailed information about your products, prices, and the installation costs.
Thank you for your interest in advance,
- uyuklayankedi (15.04.10 22:07:14 ~ 22:08:30)
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are a Turkish company operating in energy sector especially in solar energy. We have a new overseas project involving residential solarcell rooftop applications. We interested some of your products and in need of your assistance about those products' details.
We can provide our company information upon your request.
Yours
bence bu ilk mail icin daha uygun olur hemen oyle ne projesi falan soylememek lazim, istediklerinin detaylarini da ikinci mailde gonderirsin, mesaj atarsan ona da yardimci olurum...
We are a Turkish company operating in energy sector especially in solar energy. We have a new overseas project involving residential solarcell rooftop applications. We interested some of your products and in need of your assistance about those products' details.
We can provide our company information upon your request.
Yours
bence bu ilk mail icin daha uygun olur hemen oyle ne projesi falan soylememek lazim, istediklerinin detaylarini da ikinci mailde gonderirsin, mesaj atarsan ona da yardimci olurum...
- thefin (15.04.10 22:11:38)
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