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I like to feel the process of changing as a way to create myself better. There are so many changes I’ve gone through, which has brought many great things in my life. I have enough wish, will and power to add to my life new elements, at the same time remove all the bariers that prevent mine development. Then one day realize that old lifestyle has been replaced by a new one.
I like to feel the process of changing as a way to create myself better. There are so many changes I’ve gone through, which has brought many great things in my life. I have enough wish, will and power to add to my life new elements, at the same time remove all the bariers that prevent mine development. Then one day realize that old lifestyle has been replaced by a new one.
"... to add new elements to my life, remove all the bariyer that prevent selfie development at the same time..."
Böyle daha iyi gibi. Ama işin uzmanı değilim. Nacizane.
Böyle daha iyi gibi. Ama işin uzmanı değilim. Nacizane.
- femme vitale strikes back
(20.02.18 01:06:51)
Barier*
Seif*
Seif*
- femme vitale strikes back (20.02.18 01:07:16)
which have brought.
prevent me from development
one day'den sonra i dememissin. I realised de.
prevent me from development
one day'den sonra i dememissin. I realised de.
- baldur2 (20.02.18 01:07:38)
prevent mine development derken, mayın gelişimini engellemek mi demek istedin?
to add new elements to my life olmalı bence bu kısım.
to add new elements to my life olmalı bence bu kısım.
- diffarentiationation
(20.02.18 01:08:22)
naçizane çevirim komple şu şekilde,
I like feeling the process of changing as a way to create a better myself. There are so many changes I've been through, which have brought many great things to my life. I have enough wish, will and power to add new elements to my life and at the same time remove all the barriers that prevent my development. Then, one day, to realize that the old lifestyle has been replaced with a new one.
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yalnız "i have enough wish" kısmı tam olmamış gibi. o kısmı komple "i have enough will power" olarak düzeltebilirsin sanırım. illa kelime ekleyeceksen dedication falan olabilir.
ek olarak "and at the same time remove all the barriers" kısmının "while removing all the barries" olarak değişmesi de daha şık durur ama çok karıştırmak istemedim, hani eğer ödevse falan çok uçmayalım.
I like feeling the process of changing as a way to create a better myself. There are so many changes I've been through, which have brought many great things to my life. I have enough wish, will and power to add new elements to my life and at the same time remove all the barriers that prevent my development. Then, one day, to realize that the old lifestyle has been replaced with a new one.
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yalnız "i have enough wish" kısmı tam olmamış gibi. o kısmı komple "i have enough will power" olarak düzeltebilirsin sanırım. illa kelime ekleyeceksen dedication falan olabilir.
ek olarak "and at the same time remove all the barriers" kısmının "while removing all the barries" olarak değişmesi de daha şık durur ama çok karıştırmak istemedim, hani eğer ödevse falan çok uçmayalım.
- der meister (20.02.18 01:13:55 ~ 01:26:25)
der meister +1, bir tek ilk cümledeki better myself işi bozuyor, to make myself better yap onu.
- i was made for you (20.02.18 01:17:23)
anlama sadik kalarak, birtakim degisiklikliklerle beraber onerim soyledir:
I like the feeling of change, for it is one way to realize myself better. I have gone through many changes so far, which has brought many great things into my life. I have always had will and power enough to transform my life for the better and to eliminate anything that prevents my self-development. And, one day, I have just found out that old lifestyle has already been replaced with a new one!
I like the feeling of change, for it is one way to realize myself better. I have gone through many changes so far, which has brought many great things into my life. I have always had will and power enough to transform my life for the better and to eliminate anything that prevents my self-development. And, one day, I have just found out that old lifestyle has already been replaced with a new one!
- elan vital (20.02.18 01:23:24)
@Der meister +1
Sadece:
"...There have been so many changes that I've..."
Bir de "wish" kısmı biraz şeyyy. Onda da @der meister +1
Sadece:
"...There have been so many changes that I've..."
Bir de "wish" kısmı biraz şeyyy. Onda da @der meister +1
- nawar (20.02.18 01:42:31)
I like to feel the process of change* daha doğru gibi. changing diyince arkasından changing what? diye sorasım geliyor. change isim olarak da -ing gelmeden kullanılabiliyor.
edit: ya da anlatmak istediğiniz şey farklı ise bir anlam karmaşası var gibi.
edit: ya da anlatmak istediğiniz şey farklı ise bir anlam karmaşası var gibi.
- kozmosta bir nokta (20.02.18 01:46:00 ~ 01:48:46)
there had been so many changes I've gone through daha doğru diye düşünüyorum.
sonra which have diye devam etmeli çünkü birden fazla değişiklik.
...power to add new elements to my life daha doğru olur.
in the meantime to remove all the barriers that prevent my development diyebilrisin hatta might prevent desen daha güzel olur gibi.
son cümleni anlamadım.
sonra which have diye devam etmeli çünkü birden fazla değişiklik.
...power to add new elements to my life daha doğru olur.
in the meantime to remove all the barriers that prevent my development diyebilrisin hatta might prevent desen daha güzel olur gibi.
son cümleni anlamadım.
- bohr atom modeli (20.02.18 05:43:52 ~ 05:45:16)
"I'd like to think that changing, as a process, is to create a better self. There are many changes I've gone through that have brought great things into my life. I have enough willpower, wishes, and strength to add new elements to my life while, simultaneously, removing every barrier that prevents me from developing myself. One day, I'll realize that my old lifestyle has been replaced by a new one."
- sen git ben geliyorum (20.02.18 08:00:56)
- ..process of CHANGE..
- ..which HAVE brought..
- ..that prevent MY development..
- son cümle alakasız, öznesi yok.
gramer olarak böyle. alınma ama genel olarak metin biraz anlamsız olmuş.
- ..which HAVE brought..
- ..that prevent MY development..
- son cümle alakasız, öznesi yok.
gramer olarak böyle. alınma ama genel olarak metin biraz anlamsız olmuş.
- eindaclub (20.02.18 11:31:30)
şimdi bir daha bakınca belki feel değil de "I like experiencing the process of change..." dersen sanki daha iyi olur. feel duygusal kalıyor. experience ise deneyim ve sana bir şeyler katması ifadesini güçlendiriyor diye düşünüyorum.
- kozmosta bir nokta (20.02.18 17:32:52)
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