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evet bu şiire bi dövme tasarlamam gerekiyor her türlü fikre açığım.
yani hangi yolu seçsem aklım ötekinde kalır... veya, işte bu yolu seçtim, herşey buyüzden oldu gibi gibi.
nasıl anlatılır bu sizce. şiirin bir kısmı eklenebilir dövmeye. Ekte bir tane var ama çok sevmedim.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
the road not taken şiirine dövme
evet bu şiire bi dövme tasarlamam gerekiyor her türlü fikre açığım. yani hangi yolu seçsem aklım ötekinde kalır... veya, işte bu yolu seçtim, herşey buyüzden oldu gibi gibi.
nasıl anlatılır bu sizce. şiirin bir kısmı eklenebilir dövmeye. Ekte bir tane var ama çok sevmedim.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
en sevdiğim şiir, dövmesini yaptırmak isteseydim kesinlikle son 3 mısranın yazılmasını isterdim. tasarım açısından düşünürsek de çıkarılan iki anlamdan birinin seçilmesi lazım, çünkü bu şiirinin ne anlama geldiğini düşünenler ikiye ayrılıyor zıt bir şekilde. eğer bunu birisi istediyse sor bence hangi anlamı çıkardığını, dövmeyi de ona göre tasarla.
- awareim
(30.07.16 14:45:58)
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